Across I Move

Runner up in the 2025 Creatives Flash Fiction Contest, kindly supported by Fort William Mountain Festival and the Highland Bookshop.

 

Across I move, dutifully trying to stay upright. The snow below, the peak above, a traverse is the only way to make progress. I feel unbalanced, a little scared, and my foot slips; the snow falls far below from under my feet. This track will lead me to a gully that has been beckoning all year.

Weeks ago, I was on this same mountain, unthinkable that this terrain would welcome a being other than a mountain goat. Yet, there’s something about the crystals of snow, how they compact and cushion. They call.

The impassable can become a pilgrimage with only the change of a season. The previously inaccessible has become irresistible, almost as if a new dimension can be opened when the sleeping, white giants return.

I push forward, my skis gliding along the snow, off camber and off balance, but gleeful as my prize awaits.

 


Lead image: Along the cliffs of Cairn Lochain by Al Todd

 

Creator’s biography

Kitty is a relatively new mountaineer, having come across from mountain biking and ultra-distance cycling. Spending the past few summers and winters in the mountains, she’s learnt more about the world around her and has found peace accessing cairns via rope, ski, foot and bike. She’s often out finding new heights with the Eden Valley Mountaineering Club.

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